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>> No. 22393 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 8:37 am
22393 Tarantion Style Commercial
I've made a grade B style fake commercial. Please tell what u think

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>> No. 22394 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 8:54 am
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I think you should have followed my example and not posted your video projects on .gs.
>> No. 22395 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 8:56 am
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Sort of thing that would be made for a sixth form media studies assignment.
>> No. 22396 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 9:41 am
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Like a Tonetta music video with a quarter of the budget. That's some achievement, I suppose.
>> No. 22397 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 10:22 am
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Having said this (>>22394), I would like to congratulate you for having a girl in it, I didn't manage that.
>> No. 22398 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 10:26 am
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>>22397
lol
what was your video?
>> No. 22399 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 10:49 am
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>>22398

I stripped off to my undies in the woods and danced around with a homemade balaclava on, mostly. Deadlines were a factor.
>> No. 22400 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 11:04 am
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>>22399
Got some decent feedbacks?
>> No. 22402 Anonymous
10th August 2018
Friday 4:30 pm
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>>22393

It is well paced, the sound track is a good choice and I like the camera flip into the picture, that is a very good trasition both technically and in the tone of the scene. You've done a good job of telling the story through images.

The voice over is Jarring though, it is imediately apparent that the sound recording is bad, I don't know enough to tell if it is a cheep mic or if it is from being too close to it but that sticks out as the part that feels 'unprofessional'.
>> No. 22403 Anonymous
11th August 2018
Saturday 2:03 pm
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>>22393
The reference to American Gothic is cute.
>> No. 22404 Anonymous
11th August 2018
Saturday 4:14 pm
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>>22402
Yeah you should cut the voiceover, at least during the interstitials.
>> No. 22405 Anonymous
11th August 2018
Saturday 11:08 pm
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>> No. 22406 Anonymous
11th August 2018
Saturday 11:47 pm
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Genuinely loved that and not what I was expecting, and Iowa was the perfect choice of state- well done.
>> No. 22407 Anonymous
12th August 2018
Sunday 10:38 am
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Good work, nice twist.

As other lad said, voiceover needs some work.
>> No. 22408 Anonymous
13th August 2018
Monday 12:49 am
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>>22404
I wasn't going as far as to say cut it, just rerecord it. It might turn out it is better dropped but that is really more of a creative decision then I think this board is capible of making from our armchairs.

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